Friday, November 02, 2007

Review on The Holding Pattern

*What does the character do that illuminates his character?
**What does the filmmaker do that illuminates his character?


1. Team: (Les, Sukhdeep, Sheri and Owais)


*Look worried and confused a bit sneaky in the beginning -out of place, nervous.Trying control situation ( loads of dictionaries).

** The filmmaker follows the script.Makes loads of different camera angles, that makes it look more interesting and jump cuts to show the passing of time. Looking down on a character. Quick cuts between shots.
2. Team: ( Ashley, Alex and Alex)

* Character eating a lot-maybe trying to calm his nerves. Cheering himself by dancing with himself. Have a cat for a company.
** The title was very long-represents waiting. ( as Bogdan was waiting)Dancing scene and swiming pool scene are connected.Shows emotions, we hear music. Also flat was made very messy, that made feel more natural and realistic.
3. Team: (Glynn, Holy, Dave)

First short the Bogdan looked like a homeless person. It's not really much can tell about the character from his actions. Filmmaker really done more that what a character did, the audio was very effectively..like than Bogdan taps fingers.

4.Team:( Andy, Emilly, Richard, Sejpall)
*The character looked very shy, almost comically shy..all the slow , sneaky moves, very good acting. Shows loads of blank expressions on his face.
**The filmmaker followed a script but it was change quite strong, like the scene with bathroom and family tree, obviously make character look like his trying to make connections. Also the clock ticking ...and fading. The last scene, that he was in the busy street and than it's complete silence, worked really well, it shows how his mind went blank...all gone, like after the nuke.


****

Sad my team fall apart and we haven't made it, but few of us tried to make some pictures of locations, that we wanted to use for a film. (MORE AVAILABLE)



Thursday, October 18, 2007

Trapped in the box???

I hate online journal! it makes me feel angry, hysterical, and unhappy and I DON'T LIKE DO things that makes me feel like this.

**** read bellow ***

For most of you it does work, but for me personally it doesn't (at least this moment), all the time i have to force myself to sit on my "box" and write random things trying to make myself look clever...

Is not for me - I don't feel the "connection", because of various reasons:

1. It takes triple time for me to write something in English than it does for you (if I want it look good) , and in that time i could do more valuable things for me.

2. I don't feel motivated.

3. This way you building barrier between students.
I've tried it all last year, look at other students work try to make some comments-didn't work, it's not real, I'm in 2nd year and i don't feel any connection with students as my colleagues or friends..or maybe it just me? but i never used to be like this...
Why not to discuss work while we in classes??? like during surgeries? remember last year, we had some discussions in class for identities work with Deborah, was great - people were actually really communicating, telling suggestions and ideas, that really motivated me more, this year it all gone. I know I'm not the most talkative person in the class, is cause i say things than i think i have something to say, but it's good to listen for others or tell my own opinion than we are discussing each others work.

4. Sorry i feel trapped -i think we spent enough time using the "box" ( pc ), why not to have a bit of freedom and remember that we actually can talk in live not just through the "box" .

I really feel like i want to drop out from this course. I look around, I don't see many happy faces, many students are disappointed about this course. Somewhere somehow things are not going well...

We need more motivation:
  • Maybe you could make more new projects and lectures instead of using the "old" stuff.
  • We definatelly need more seminars about technical side of media, instead seminar about metaphor, no offense but ask how many students liked that, we all done that at school.
  • It be great if you do work with us, like I love Andy ( and who doesn't ) cause he actually does everything himself what he ask to do for us. That's the strongest motivation we could get. It's always nice to see example of the teacher.
I had to tell all this, even don't know if it's any use, but it made me feel a bit better. I think i will try start updating my journal, even I don't like it...so might "shout" in here in time again, just to make myself feel better... thank you

Monday, May 28, 2007

HELLO >>




I found this animation on atomfilms.com, and felt in love with a beautiful elegant story about the guy with old tape deck instead on his head. He trys to chat with a "CD-player" girl, but because of his old technology he find it quite dificult...but he doesn't give up...
I loved the technique of how it was made as well, it seams so lively and really suits the mood of the animation. Great lightening and music.
The director is Australian Jonathan Nix, Animater, Painter - Great Artist. Here is his website with more work. I found out that this animation won ATOM awards and AFI for the best sound.
The paragraph from interview with J.N.:

"You started with the character, didn’t you?

I did. The character came from a cassette player I have at home. I’d been thinking, “This looks like a little person, and it looks a bit sad”. It was a bit old and it didn’t really work very well. I pitched a completely different story to the class, which no one responded to, and then I just had this little drawing of the cassette head on this little body and I’d written: “This person is lost. This person has trouble communicating”. And that was it.

The class went, “Oh, that’s good. Someone who uses tapes to communicate”. So I swung it round and went with that."

http://www.sleepybrain.net/jonathan-nix/ ( found at 26-05-07)

Wednesday, May 23, 2007

>> E4 Fortune Teller

Front Back







The idea slowly developed from E4 pop up flyer. Dear good Simon, suggested me that I also should make some flyer that would be cheaper to produce, as E4 pop up is quite expensive to make. He remembered about the old hand made game he used to play at school with other kids, he was so exited about it, that even tried to make one, but just couldn't remembered how. After seeing him so enthusiastic trying to make that game I thought to myself that's it's probably good idea to make one myself - and call it E4 fortune teller. I think it's straight forward... playful...opens the heart ( brings memories). Suitable for E4 viewers as most of them are 16-34 years old. It also relates to my other work ( animations: involves hands action and looks like a flower).
I have never played this game before in my life, so I couldn't let it go without trying to play it myself. My question was : “If I ever be happy?” and it says: “ no” I never play this game again. It make me realize that I should put a warning on the flyer saying: "Do not forget it just a game". lol

Design Purpose:
  • Keep young and funky style, by using loads of white space, making a contrast with bright colours (e4 symbols) and using "hand writing" font, so it becomes more warm.
  • Make E4 symbol clear and more appreciable. Have instructions at back of the flyer how to make the E4 fortune teller.
  • Easy and fun to use - have instructions at the back.
  • Cheaper to produce.
Software: Adobe Illustrator - I've really enjoyed working with it- it's pretty straight forward, had some language issues as I didn't know the meaning of some tools and after translation it got confused even more, so had to try each option myself and find out what it does - took ages and made loads of mess, but was fun.

Feedback. Easy recognition. Good for all ages. Simple and nice design


>> Visual Design

Than creating a design, I've been looking in to diferent peoples work,magazines (computer arts) and try to analys it. MUST CHECK THIS WEBSITE. I have looked at it every time I work with colours, as it has a little interactive games and animations about the colours I have used the most for my project. It talks about meaning and symbolism of the colour. Really cool and cheerful
Designing with colour the website bellow come in really handy-i have used this funky animated website for all my parts of the project. It talks about colour Communication and Symbolism.


Other books were very useful. For designers the value of intuition, instictand accident is very important - through these routes emotional effects are produces, new form are created, strong images are devised. Catching the attention in a field wich is dominated by screaming images appears to be over- riding task. page 80. It's good book as it talks alot about all visual language aspects: colour, shape,type,proportion and etc.

Monday, May 07, 2007

E4 Game= "Look, it's E4"

Branding thourgh game:


"The channel E4 idents are good example of how to create innovative media identity.They engage the viewer in a game of recognising the brand. In this act of recognition, the viewer's own creative process is associated with the brand". Guy Birkin "Brand Identities"


The largest part of this project - ident recognision has been made through looking at playful and "young" side of it. Making a sticker, I haven't consider to much time on the design, as I wanted it to be just E4 logo, so viewers wouldn't have any doubt it's talking about E4 channel ( later on than it be more common it could be changed). So E4 sticker is nothing more just a number - E4 symbol. But the idea behind is a TV game: played during easter, xmas , valentines day etc.

Imagine you simple go to the news shop to get ur TV magazine. Inside you find E4 sticker. Little instructions tells you that's a game for all familly, you have to stick your E4 sticker on the house window, so it would be visible from a street and register online or by phone with your address. Leave the rest for your fortune. Than TV people would pick up the city to visit. To pick the house no.(only ones got E4 sticker on window and registered) they could ask to do that for kids in the street. They go see people living in this address and give them prizes: ( TV,DVD player etc). Simon and other people thought it be nice idea that the wining prize would hide in fortune teller. So they choose the colour, number and find out what is the prize.

This game unifes all my parts of the project together. Maybe in the future it be good idea to change the design of a sticker, maybe have E4 inside the heart (for Valentines day) or smth like that. For the first time I wanted it be clear and recognisible symbol - so it won't be no doubt it's E4 channel we talking about- great, young generous, funny etc.

>>PoP up E4 flyer

As soon as I’ve decided what I’m going to do for my E4 stings, I had the idea for my E4 flyer. What i have to think about was design and effect on the audience, so I’ve been looking in the shops, bars, different magazines to get some inspiration.

The idea for a flyer came up from a pop up map, my mum brought back from some journey than I was just a little girl, I used to like playing with it, strange enough, not like other toys I’ve destroyed I’ve saved it till this day. lol

Anyway, what I was thinking about is “survival”. Try to make this flyer to survive as long as possible. Using pop up technique might a bit more expensive, but the effect is much stronger, as people like hand made things, they more personal and more funny.
It’s more chance people would keep it instead of just cast aside.

Trying my flyer to become survival, I tried to find a subtle way to trying to get the flyer more personal and more interactive with audience.

From here my flyer became message/flyer. On front you it is a message with empty space where person have to write it’s own choice of what program he would like to watch. Inside, it’s E4 logo with the time. It’s made from three parts:

  1. Make curious -> Let’s watch …..”
  2. “Make an appointment” -> on E4 --:--h (also introduce channel.)
  3. Get a reply "Yes or NO"

So you gave a message/flyer that you can leave in the pubs, shops, or just give to the person you are fancy.

And the audience subconsciously “reads” these messages which can sometimes override explicit messages in text and images.*

>>The design

General

“Visual language is what the “heart” “read” after the mind has become quiet.” *

Before I start designing my flyer, I’ve looked for some books about basic design principles. It’s two I really liked as one of them describes the main points of visual language and other one also talks about technical issues of print design.**

*P.Bonnici.1998.Visual language the hidden medium of communication. London

Talks about visual language between colour, shape, text. It was useful of making a poster, as it helped to understand how to communicate with the audience better.

**B.Gordon and M.Gordon2002.The complete guide to digital graphic design. First edition. London.Thames&Hudson.


While making sketches for my flyer design and try to think of the interesting one, got too thirsty and went to a fridge get some drink, there my design has born. It was little fridge magnets…that got my attention! Quickly made some note and stuck it on the fridge so I could make a photo to imagine how it would like on a flyer – and I really liked the result.

I thought instead of normal magnets will use e4 magnet.

As it’s a message flyer – I think note on the fridge with e4 magnet would suit well.

The font I used was mistral regular. I wanted a hand writing effect as you still suppose to add your own writing so it would mach better.

Colour – mainly purple for background, used as identifying marker.




Click here to find out how to make it to a flyer.


Problems and improvement:

  1. Because of my poor knowledge about illustrator it was hard to make a paper look like read note.
  2. The background was purple with little e4 symbols, unfortunately after printing it was hardly able to see little e4 and the colour from purple changed to pink.

I don’t think it was my mistake as after reprinted it again the background colour was purple as it should be, but little e4’s were still invisible.

  1. I was a bit struggling with a message on the note, first I thought about “ will you watch … with me?” but after some consultations I’ve been told that it might be to personal, so I changed it “ Let’s watch…!” , now I think it might would sound better “Let’s watch…..together!”.
Price.I've emailed one of the leading in pop-ups and interactive marketing leading company [http://www.whitneywoods.co.uk ] with enquiry of how much it would cost to produce 10.000 of those flyers as they have a simillar example of flyer.They send me a price list back. About £3.500 quite a lot.

Feedback. The people I’ve showed it to says it does grab the attention and evoking emotional message. My friends from Lithuania told me, that they like the way for introducing channel. As if they come over the never heard about it, but than u get such flyer, it is possible at least go online and find out. It also related to my E4 stings, as it’s the action using hands and involves keeping your channel. The main idea of the animation.




Friday, April 27, 2007

3D MAX

My first 3d animation, really enjoyed making my name jump, i believe without the notes it would have taken me much longer , because most of the tools aren't familiar to the most programs I've used and it so many of them:( it's sad, cause the quality of uploaded video is poor and half of effect is missing, it looks much better on the windows media player, but still i'm so POM = Proud Of Myself , lol.

Motiono by chocopillow

wow - this one took even longer-drived me mad in some moments, but i fight till the end.lol I love octopus, but somehow this one looks like his bum is burning as he swims so fast, but i like it i gave him a name , "hysterical up"


Motiono by chocopillow

Tuesday, April 24, 2007

E4 WEB PAGE CREATION

Creating My no1. web

Main thoughts:

  • Accessibility
Design a site to work for everyone."The power of the Web is in its universality. Access by everyone regardless of disability is an essential aspect."
-- Tim Berners-Lee, W3C Director and inventor of the World Wide Web
  • Style and Layout
  • Information ( held in html file)
  • Software

Web Design samples-------


My 1st
try in photoshop

(click to make it larger)










My 2nd try in Photoshop.

Simon advise me to use
FreeHand or
Adobe Illustrator,
for a quality purpose.








>> Work In Illustrator <<


Black and white test to make sure is still look ok.


Accessibility. Make sure it is usable on the main browser flavors and versions
  • I've checked the colours to make sure it would look alright for colour blinded people.[see appendix]
    • (make black and white) the design to see if it still makes sense
    • haven't used more than 4 colours.
    • used lighter font colour on darker background
    • Ease of use = return visitors
    • Make it small, so it download quick enough
Protanopia test Deaternopia test

Appendix . Approximately one in twelve people may not be able to use your web site properly due to some form of color blindness. At best, your site won't look to a color blind person as you designed it, at worst, this could mean that text is unreadable, navigation unusable and elements are invisible.

  • Most color blind people can't distinguish between shades of red and green
  • Shades of these colors appear lighter to color blind people
  • The most common forms of color blindness are:
    • Protanopia ­ unable to receive red, and
    • Deuteranopia ­ unable to receive green

http://www.jessett.com/

Style and layout.I've tried keep the page structure simple and neat. I used sub-heading with heading to separate sections of test. Highlight important words. Used pale background with dark test, avoid colours that would be difficult to see for colour blind people.

As to read on the screen is much more harder than on paper, i make the sentences of the page are short so it‘s easier to read, avoid capitals and italics. I think navigation of the page is also pretty straight forward,more important things are kept higher of the page, so the visitors can locate things quicker.The top of the left i put the company logo, which is E4, I didn‘t add any text no more, but make ornamental background, so it make E4 look more playful and add some dynamic to the page. And also it separates the top links from a main body.I left maximum space for a content. I've tried make a balanced between content and design.


Software. Adobe Illustrator and Dreamweaver.

I've tried to use freehand at first, but somehow i didn't click with it, even after trying some lessons, so I tried illustrator and it qiock became my "good friend":)


Monday, March 05, 2007

2nd animation

E4 music Sting


As you can see it has been made using the same stop motion technique [see appendix], as for first animation, by thinking it will gane me more expierence and better understanding. This time it went much smoother and quicker, as I avoid the same mistakes and descover some more useful tools. e.g. for cutting bit of the picture it's much faster and simpler with magnetic lasso tool instead of magic wind (that i used for first animation).

It was quite useful,constantly check how the animation visually looks on image ready and if it needs any changing before getting to far,while making a background in Photoshop,



Magnetic lasso tool Test in ImageReady


Appendix>

Stop motion (pop. frame-by-frame) is a generic general term for an animation technique which makes static objects appear to move. The object is moved by very small amounts between individual frames, producing the effect of motion when the film is played back, as in conventional drawn and painted animation.

FeedBack.

Some of the people mentioned that artistic style of my animations looks simillar to late ones MTV stings. I have tried to look for some example, but wasn't succssesful.It would be quite interesting to find it and to compare it.

Simon mentioned that i should try to work with the music and try to expand E4 music logo at the end of animation, to add stronger accent for it an the music. ( it means more work for me)


Friday, February 23, 2007

E4 sting evolution

E4 sting evolution

>> Loads of "white nights" with loads of thought in the head, that 80% disappears forever in the morning

>> Constant interrogation of friends about ideas


>> Sketches everywhere i go in my minds, public toilets lol ( not really )

.....LOoooooooNG THINKING...THINKING...thinking...thinkinininig...


So finally considering my tinny expierence as a I‘ve gave u
p on all my "titanic" ideas and came up with the one described bellow in the " Goodies bag" That I liked , most of the people I asked liked it, hope the rest of the world will like it too:) Hope i managed to embody it.

I've never took so many pictures of the hands in my entire life.


Was much harder than I thought. As to perform 24 frame action per 1sec using photo camera was impossible. Finally 12 f/sec was a solution. So Big Thank you for Ian Sanders help in taking pic. and Andrew Love for amazing 10 MEGA PIXEL camera- yahooo!!! Even I took a mln of pictures for my animation (as I never was satisfied with a ones i took before), i left only with 72, (12f/s). So i had a real good practise using this fantastic camera:) Sure later I found out I could go easier way, just film the opening hands action and import it in Adobe after Effects as stills, remove the ones i don't need to create the "chop" effect on animation to make it look more abstract and surreal. Well, we all learning, finally I still got the same effect .

It's a first short test of the idea. The music has been made myself on Ejay dance 3. I like the effect of calm "growing" atmosphere on it, but i'm not sure if it's a right one to use. So I'm gonna get some more versions of Ejay, hopefully it will have more options of the sounds I could use to create the right tone.

Ok, here is an animation made . The process:

  • Imported all the pictures into Photoshop and resize to 720x576, cut the bits of every single picture I don't want to be seen.
  • Imported into Adobe Premier Pro and make a avi. movie

I had to change the background as I didn't have the copyrights for rose image. I'm not really good in drawing so I just played around with it in the photoshop, using different effects.Finally I stoped with a liquify effect as Ifound it easy to play around and, also I could changed it every frame so than playing back it looked like it's moving. Hopefully it is still possible get the idea that's it a flower. The colours are related to the main color at the E4 channel at the moment -purple, also made it look more retro style. The communication between animation and audience is quite clear, as it send various messages:giving (then e4 releases from a hands), keeping,teasing...

Trying diferent effects for background:


The shorter version of animation was made for idea of using it for more expensier time of the day and longer version for cheaper time of day on tv, in terms of saving money.

Problems:

  • I haven't saved single pictures as layers (psd.files) after working with them. So it was impossible to go back and correct it if i have to.
  • The first "test" animation I made using flash and i found out that it's really takes much longer time than using premier.
  • After importing stills in Premier, the animation would be very long ( 4min ), so it took me long time to learn that i had to export it as a movie than change a duration speed and render it again. Don't know if it was a correct solution, but it did work for me.
  • Have a visible flickers, that i want to reduce.

Monday, February 12, 2007

My "Goodies Bag" for E4

My E4 Package includes:

* 2 x E sting Video clip

animation for E4 music

animation for E4

* 2 x Flyers

* 1 x Sticker

* 1 x Website

E4 STING >>

* E4 sting animation using stop motion

* It’s no character or story involved

* Very abstract

* E4 + Hands + National English Flower

* Hands – keep it, love it watch it

* Rose – UK made programmes,

* Represents changes of e4 channel

* Logo stays the same

BEAR CAN PICTURES-PIN HOLE CAMERA

Just wanted to upload some pictures, that have been made before Xmas. ohhh...xmas - was lovely ..but sweet spring is so close - so stay all happy, smile LOADS and LOVE :D

I really enjoyed the expierence of taking pictures with a bear can - it was such a discovery for me, great stuff, after i did some bets to my friends saying them i can make a picture with a bear can - lol!!!Their reaction was amazing. So if you want to try make some pic and have a laugh from your friends is so simple. Here is the WEBSITE with some more information.Enjoy.

>>IDENT_E4_GO!!!<<

RESEARCH

Considering the lack of knowledge in given project, all seemed so new and confusing; research was a “life-saver” in this situation. It helped to gain better understanding and feel more comfortable with the start of the project. To make it easier the research was breaking down in to parts:

  • Advertisement research through internet mostly. Making a good branding is important to know a good knowledge of recent market and company. It’s worth reading the article found at the following web address, author J.W.Thomas says: “Advertising has the power to persuade...change markets and improve profit margins…The companies that master the creative guidance and the testing systems to consistently develop and deploy great advertising will own the future and the fortunes that go with it. Great advertising is a cloak of invincibility.”*. It means good research will impact good advertisement, this how big companies like McDonalds, BMW and etc.become strong among their competitors with big profits and long term relationships with customers.

* Jerry W. Thomas., 2007. Advertising Effectiveness By Jerry W. Thomas. [Online].
Available from:
http://www.decisionanalyst.com/publ_art/AdEffectiveness.asp [cited 15 April 2007].

Another good source of ident work for TV channels can be found at: http://idents.tv/blog/



RESEARCH FOR TV BRANDING (E4 channel)

E4 channel present:

  • The LOGO = Good logo is important

BBC-1 + globe.

ITV+yellow and blue box

E4 +E4=The E4 has everything a symbol needs.

  • Style :

Simple, but effective

‘70s looks fresh and suits the channel

Clear logo-you get what you see

Logo identifies the station

  • Imagination

Original

Different-grab attention

- The jumping E4s coming out of sardine cans and mechanical sliding bars

- The break bumpers

  • Consistency
We know we are watching E4, and, unlike the rest of the channels, everything doesn’t blur into one.


- The continuity is part of the enjoyment and not just something between the programmes or an opportunity to flaunt corporate identity as continuity these days so often is.

Everything E4 does shouts at you “E4” and it shouts it loud

"Nowhere else on digital TV will you see a font quite like the one E4 use, and the purple and white cements the station so that you are absolutely certain who you’re dealing with." James Pittman

  • Modern

E4 doesn’t have clocks.

It doesn’t have start-ups.

There are no in-vision announcers sat behind a desk with a suit, tie and a bowl of petunias.

Nothing is serious , feel of comedy

E4 stands out from a crowd of the ingredients of great presentation.


2005 E4 refresh their look. Here is how did they changed. Precursor (a design company) have refreshed E4's on air information delivery package.

  • The project include:all information ,menu stings, menus, promo endboards, and start and end of transmission stings.
  • Precursor's approach was to develop an E4 world,made of two spaces. The first space [ outside ] is a traditional environment kept for information. Dominated by the channel logo. The second space [ inside ] is white, it is a surreal and twisted anarchic place where anything goes and surrealism and juxtaposition are the rules.



Perfomance of a Day

Fantastic Walk with course mates and beautiful day - the best part in the perfomances day. The most memorables were only two:
  • Harolds Shipmen's (the bigest serial killer) perfomance, if I can call it this name, as really it was more about a "short walk" through H.Shipmens life. The jorney started at uni, ( we did not know where we goin-that made it even more interesting)on the way we had to find and read a little notes with the facts of doctor's life. The end of distination was the collage ( can't remember the name) the H.Shipman was studying. Simple and ejoyable.

  • Erasmus Darwin - a physician, well known as a poet. The perfomance I enjoyed most. Firs the location they chose was amazing (the pub near the river), very realxing, inspiring atmoshpehre. At live presentation I saw a videos taken on location at Darwin house aslo they had a pictures from museam. The fanniest part was a bingo game, with key dates of Darwin’s life as bingo numbers. It was effective- interesting-funny and i really think guys done a good job.P.S As always, Jools the only lucky - he took the prize.

Sunday, January 28, 2007

JOOLS&DOMINIC=> DOUBLE POWER


Click on the Image

Dr. Harold Shipman (Freddy) -->The doctor of life death. One of the “greatest” murderer the world has ever known. Nearly 400 hundred murders…
Task
To make a documentary with live performance based on research and location that relates in some ways to that person.
Evolution
While researching doctor’s biography, his life style, the idea was to find the answer why he became the Doctor of death not life. The reason why he killed it’s difficult to discover as his killing style was different of usual serial killers, who like to toy with their victims. There were no signs of violence of Harold's victims; they all seem died peacefully and at home (safe surroundings). One of the thoughts was that he was re-creating his mother’s death scene (he was very close to her)as she was suffering of cancer and doctor injected her withmorphie on her death day (the same method Harold used to kill most of his victims). All of his victims most was older women, maybe he killed them as he did not wanted them to suffer the same pain as his mother did.There are so many thougts of why he start killing.
We've decided to make a performance in old people house. (As all of his victims were older people)We planned to set up a live discussion show. Through discussions trying to find answers to these questions: how did this prolific serial killer go undetected for so long? Who made him monster he became? Also projecting images realted to Harold’s life and the places he spent most of his time during the show. Unfortunately, as our team didn’t play well, we had to cancel our plans. Bellow is the script me and Ian Sanders wrote that shoud be used in the show:


Stuff marked with *Stars* is still undecided and may need further thought.

Problems I have run into : Finding it hard to develop characters ‘Personalities’ , they need to be more unique from each other.

The sentences are huge, going to be very hard to remember.



TV SHOW (discussion)

TV presenter: *name of Seth* (walks in)

“-Good afternoon ladies and gentlemen, thank you for coming for today’s live show. I hope you will enjoy it. As the topic of our show today is not about cooking (pause)-sorry ladies-or racing cars (pause)-gentlemen (look very sorry). I ask you to concentrate and keep focus as today’s topic is about murders, to be more specific about serial killers (pause)(tone up) Dr Harold Shipman, known as Freddy (hold hand up and wiggle fingers), one of the *greatest* murderer the world has ever known.(pause) (continue)
-Nearly 400 murders, it puts him well ahead of modern history’s most prolific serial killer to date-Pedro (“monster of Andes”) Lopez. Convicted of 57 murders in 1980, Lopez killed 300 young girls in Columbia.
25 years of silent murders. So how did this prolific serial killer go undetected for so long? Who made him monster he became? Today we will try to find out if these questions can be answered, the questions that lie in story that began in earnest over fifty years ago. To help find answers I also invited:
Mr James Morgan, the chief of police for the Nottingham area… maybe his years of experience going up against dangerous criminals can shed some light on the criminal mind of Dr Shipman. (Mr Morgan Waves)
I would also like to introduce another special guest, Dr Paul Sinfield who is a respected authority in Psychology. (Paul says ‘Glad to be here *Seth*’)

‘Today’s topic involves exploring the motivations and reason for such a respected person to become a doctor of death. Let us start off by asking our good chief of police to give his views’

Mr Morgan

‘Well there could be many reasons, but I would blame it on his past drug addiction… I see it all the times on the street, some kid gets involved in drugs, fries his brain and then we gotta clean up the mess… then our budget gets cut * blah blah – make up some line, he’s trying to get extra funding… blah blah * -

Seth interrupts!

‘Ok, I think we have gone off the point….’

Paul interrupts

Those funds could be going to another cause, like finding out what makes offender become criminals and stopping them before they get started…

*Morgan interrupts, Paul interrupts … Seth is forced to calm down situation *



Seth

Ok now that we have that issue out of the way, let’s go back to the matter at hand. The question is ,Why?

Mr Morgan

I’m not no fancy doctor but I think some people are just born to be bad. I mean just look at *Gary glitter* or Tony Blair.


Seth

Very interesting, what are your views Paul

Paul

Well some evidence points towards his mother being the cause, she slowly perished from lung cancer in front of his eyes, she only found relief when the doctor administered morphine. He probably tried to recreate this point in his life as all his victims where overdosed with the same drug.

Seth

To understand the killer I think we should look towards his childhood.

Mr Morgan

From what I can tell about him by reviewing his reports, He was born in this very city, Nottingham.
*He was a loner and his teachers reported that he was not into being part of a team but excelled on the football field which was strange. He did not have many friends...*

Paul

…Due to the fact that his mother closely chose and monitored his social life.

Seth

It is very interesting that this conversation keeps coming back to his mother… please continue.



Mr Morgan

Reports indicate however that he began to open up more in medical school, maybe due to the fact he had to live away from home. He met his wife, Primrose and soon where married. He then joined a clinic in Yorkshire.

Seth

Really… Do you know if his colleges noticed anything strange?

Mr Morgan

Actually yes, they said his attitude was a little odd. He seemed to look down on his peers. But the main thing was when one doctor found strange entries in his prescription orders.

(Paul interrupts)

Paul

..Yes I remember reading about that, apparently he was writing out prescriptions in patience names and conveniently ‘picking’ them up and delivering them. The drug was called ‘Pethadine’ a morphine-like analgesic. He was challenged on this subject by his fellow doctors and later expelled from the practice.

Seth

But did‘nt he own his own practice later after a quick rehabilitation period?

Paul

Yes, Strangly enough he did. * Thats when it is believed he started his 23 year rampage * (Needs confirming via reasearch)

Seth

Wow, So how did he go undetected for so long?

Mr Morgan

Well, people tent to trust their doctors and none of the victims died in a violent fashion, also * Harold Shipman was always on the scene to pronounce death* he also wrote the final reports and ‘doctored’ them to cover it up.

Seth

So how he was eventually found out?

Paul

I believe it had something to do with a will, he had made a poor forgery and was caught out. It was as if he wanted to be stopped in the end. This is a common case with some serial killers; they feel invincible or just have a subconscious desire to be caught. He was a doctor; he could have used something untraceable instead of Morphine.

Mr Morgan

His computer was seized and his medical files on closer inspection had been changed to cover up his deeds, he mainly added afflictions to his patients that where completely untrue as family members testified. But in the end Justice was served.


Seth

Thank you for Justice and thank you for your thoughts you share here today Mr. Paul and Mr .Morgan
I would like to know what audience is thinking about all this- do you have anything to say? Or does anyone have some questions for our guest’s of studio? Anyone? (Waiting for audience reply)
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Ladies and gentleman our time has run out and it’s time to say goodbye till next week. I hope you enjoyed our little show! Big thank you for your time and big thank you for the studio guest! Take care of yourself and watch out your doctors.